Thursday, October 30, 2008

My Free Verse Poem

I have been learning to write all types of poetry using different language features. This week I learnt how to write a free verse poem. A free verse poem is a poem which you can include anything you want in it. I wrote a free verse poem on lollies.

LOLLIES

There was once a grumpy, grouchy, gross man called Creepy Cross Colin.
Slurp slurp slurp- he was a terrible eater.
When it was " Sports Day For Old Men"
everybody would say, " Creepy Colin's such a cheater."
When the old man ate, he would get bits of food stuck in his long black beard.
Everyone thought he was weird.
He was as grumpy as an old lion.
One day Colin saw a shop full of lollies,
Normally he would have just snorted, grrrrr and walked past.
But something odd caught his eye...
A small sign that said: FREE LOLLIES
Ahhhhh, Colin gasped, "Mollie"s Lollie shop?"
He said amazed.
Molly was his old best friend that he missed soooo much.
She thought that money was stupid, so she gave away everythig for free.
Colin went into the shop and took thousands of lollies and ate them all!
Then he went to the lady at the front counter
and asked if the shop was owed by Molly.
She said, ''No sir, this shop is owed by Mr. Spok,
and by the way, will now you pay for all those lollies?"
But.. but.. stammered Colin.
"The sign on the door is a trick", she said with a cheeky grin.
Colin was in shock!
"Now how many lollies did you eat?"

Thursday, October 23, 2008

Onamatopoia- my poem

Onamatopoeia is a word which makes a sound like crash, bang and woof.
I wrote a poem called Lunchtime with onomatopoia in it. It goes like this:

LUNCHTIME
'' It's lunchtime!" said the teacher.
Everybody stomped the floor.
Then went out of the door.
After eating, the boys were playing handball.
Bounce bounce went the ball on the wall.
Boing! One of the boys hit the ball so hard
It flew through the air and landed on the grass.
After they picked up the ball,
a few girls including me started chasing them.
Thud, thud, thud went our feet.
He he ha ha! we were all laughing and having fun.
Everybody started joining in, in the sun.
Pant pant pant,pant- it was very tiring.
Duff! I didn't see the wiring
I didn't get hurt though
'cause it was very low.
Just then we all heard a loud, piercing whistle, whoooooooooo!!
We all rushed over to the shaded area to leave for swimming, stomp, stomp, thud, thud.
Mmmmmm mmmmmm My friend is humming a great tune.
Lunchtime ended so soon!

Thursday, October 16, 2008

Acrostic Poem

I wrote an acrostic poem on friends for homework. It goes like this :

F faithful
R reliable
I interesting
E entertaining
N natural
D different
S sharing